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so i just found one i wrote when i was 14. It's a silly rhyme i wrote to my then ex girlfriend. haha. remember, i wasn't emo, i was emotional. i think i named it Retribution because it was a new word i learned and i thought it sounded cool
Retribution
You make me feel so many things,
Inside I hear you lie.
The emotions just keep flowing,
I can’t stop although I try.
The tears I shed don’t go away,
They stay so close to me.
To rescue all their other friends
From my eyes they try to flee.
heart to soul and body to mind,
I feel so much pain,
The speedy heartbeat the swollen eyes,
The tears they come like rain.
My bloody fist with torn off skin,
A reminder of the hate,
The love I still feel for you,
Taunts me its my fate.
Had I not fallen for you
I would’ve found your soul,
In the heart of another girl,
to make my body whole.
You and I are pieces,
Of a puzzle that’s hard to make,
The pieces are so scattered,
Its just time we have to take.
You took that time away from me,
Raped me of my heart
You reeled me in then threw me out,
Can’t stand us to be apart.
I kept you at arms length,
then you decided to leave,
I tried to fix things they were going well,
But me u had to deceive.
My heart and mind is tired,
I think bout you heaps.
Just remember I still love you,
Your heart I couldn’t keep.
kids say the darndest things. :rolleyes:
Desire unfulfilled can make this world a living hell,
and there is only one thing worse as far as I can tell.
That is watching others have their needs and wants fulfilled,
all leading lives that never cease to leave them truly thrilled.
At times I feel like dying just might be my only hope;
the dead do not with envy, anger, sadness have to cope.
But somewhere deep inside me I naïvely have to say:
“perhaps tomorrow won't be quite as gloomy as today,
perhaps I'll see the day when all my troubles go away.”
And though I know it's likely nought but my naïveté,
that is why, in lonely misery, I choose to stay.
I've noticed alot of raps, poems and rhymes being posted, so i thought i'd bump this thread for anyone who wants to post their pieces.
Destruction
The sun rises in the west
bursting before us all
The people gather
drinking for today
The comets rain down
stealing life away
The skies burn
and the seas boil
The flesh melts
The bone brakes
The screams of fear
The screams of sorrow
But alas
there shall never be
a morrow
another year ended, another year born,
discreetly i watch her on new years dawn.
a loss of breath, a heavy sigh,
she smiles brightly as i cry.
through welling tears, i look away,
just killing time till the very next day,
then i wake up down, and light a smoke,
inhaling deeply, try not to choke.
i walk through life with infinite sadness,
covered by a fake imitation of gladness,
beneath this mask there is a man,
who can't believe who can't understand.
why love somehow devours him all,
stays on his mind, made his life stall.
i can't stop spiraling off this track,
i just want to love and be loved back.