"Ira" (A sexual scribe)

â??Iraâ?�

Emerald eyes of most sullen sheen
pierce the soul, those eyes of green.
A gaze of relentless stormy sky
ache the seduction drawing nigh.

Her tender heart, like the Monarchs wing,
pounds in fury for the coming king,
the butterfly bosom thus leads astray
all sanityâ??s reason on this very day.

A hearken most eager to heavenly tune,
dancing naked under a summers moon,
thinking of pleasure amidst all fair pain,
Ira feeds her king, and receives his reign.

I wrote this last night :stoned:, and thought it sounded cool. :cool:

You're a poet. And you didn't even know it.

Actually I write a lot of poems...I was experimenting with a new style on this one. :D

I've since extended, and tweaked it a bit, so the one posted is quite incomplete, haha!

Poems have styles?

Many!

Free verse
R&M
Prose
Haiku
sonnets

the list goes on....

and then there are 'styles' within the styles, lol!

some of us have friend's
and others hear voice's
we are what we eat
so make better choices
junkyard your a nut
its ok im one too
you say cool shit
that seems to be true

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Originally Posted by friendowl

some of us have friend's
and others hear voice's
we are what we eat
so make better choices
junkyard your a nut
its ok im one too
you say cool shit
that seems to be true

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Friendowl always posts in a poetic form. It doesn't rhyme but there is some method to his madness and his posts are usually very fun and/or helpful.

Man, nice poem. I like poetry, but I'm sad that usually poets don't get known as being poets because it's rare that a poem is read in public.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by friendowl

some of us have friend's
and others hear voice's
we are what we eat
so make better choices
junkyard your a nut
its ok im one too
you say cool shit
that seems to be true

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friendowl will come
and friendowl will go
he has a real name
that very few know
he posts like a madman
insanity with no name
heâ??s built like a truck
and has an OG game.

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Originally Posted by P.E.N.G.U.I.N.

Friendowl always posts in a poetic form. It doesn't rhyme but there is some method to his madness and his posts are usually very fun and/or helpful.

Man, nice poem. I like poetry, but I'm sad that usually poets don't get known as being poets because it's rare that a poem is read in public.

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I finished it this morning, and this is what I got! :cool:

"Ira"


Emerald windows of most sullen sheen

pierce the soul, the bewitching green;

her gaze relentless, like stormy skyâ??s

ache of seduction, those enchanted eyes.



Tender a heart, like the Monarchs wing,

trembles in fury for her coming king;

the emotional chaos, with senses astray,

burns piercing affection, this carnal day.



Rhythmic quivers, behind heavenly tune,

dancing naked under a summers moon,

thinking of pleasure amidst all fair nerve,

she spins by circle in harmonious curve.



The fury concedes beneath sun broke sky

stopped to a halt, this most sensual spry.

She greets her king, by no means feign,

seduces him whole, and bids his reign.