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06-01-2006, 06:20 AM #1OPSenior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
??Ira?
Emerald eyes of most sullen sheen
pierce the soul, those eyes of green.
A gaze of relentless stormy sky
ache the seduction drawing nigh.
Her tender heart, like the Monarchs wing,
pounds in fury for the coming king,
the butterfly bosom thus leads astray
all sanity??s reason on this very day.
A hearken most eager to heavenly tune,
dancing naked under a summers moon,
thinking of pleasure amidst all fair pain,
Ira feeds her king, and receives his reign.
I wrote this last night :stoned:, and thought it sounded cool.JunkYard Reviewed by JunkYard on . "Ira" (A sexual scribe) ??Ira? Emerald eyes of most sullen sheen pierce the soul, those eyes of green. A gaze of relentless stormy sky ache the seduction drawing nigh. Her tender heart, like the Monarchs wing, pounds in fury for the coming king, the butterfly bosom thus leads astray Rating: 5
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06-01-2006, 10:33 AM #2Senior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
You're a poet. And you didn't even know it.
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06-01-2006, 11:18 AM #3OPSenior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
Actually I write a lot of poems...I was experimenting with a new style on this one.
I've since extended, and tweaked it a bit, so the one posted is quite incomplete, haha!
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06-01-2006, 12:40 PM #4Senior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
Poems have styles?
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06-01-2006, 01:32 PM #5OPSenior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
Many!
Free verse
R&M
Prose
Haiku
sonnets
the list goes on....
and then there are 'styles' within the styles, lol!
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06-01-2006, 06:08 PM #6Senior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
some of us have friend's
and others hear voice's
we are what we eat
so make better choices
junkyard your a nut
its ok im one too
you say cool shit
that seems to be trueLove is patient and kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. Love is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, and it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. Love always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres
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06-01-2006, 09:25 PM #7Senior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
Originally Posted by friendowl
Man, nice poem. I like poetry, but I'm sad that usually poets don't get known as being poets because it's rare that a poem is read in public.
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06-02-2006, 04:06 PM #8OPSenior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
Originally Posted by friendowl
friendowl will come
and friendowl will go
he has a real name
that very few know
he posts like a madman
insanity with no name
he??s built like a truck
and has an OG game.
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06-02-2006, 04:13 PM #9OPSenior Member
"Ira" (A sexual scribe)
Originally Posted by P.E.N.G.U.I.N.
"Ira"
Emerald windows of most sullen sheen
pierce the soul, the bewitching green;
her gaze relentless, like stormy sky??s
ache of seduction, those enchanted eyes.
Tender a heart, like the Monarchs wing,
trembles in fury for her coming king;
the emotional chaos, with senses astray,
burns piercing affection, this carnal day.
Rhythmic quivers, behind heavenly tune,
dancing naked under a summers moon,
thinking of pleasure amidst all fair nerve,
she spins by circle in harmonious curve.
The fury concedes beneath sun broke sky
stopped to a halt, this most sensual spry.
She greets her king, by no means feign,
seduces him whole, and bids his reign.
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