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sToNeDpEnGuIn420
11-09-2004, 05:30 PM
Reach within to hold the hand of your foe
But just remeber, an eye for an eye and a toe for a toe
Losing your mind in this battle of wits
This test of tiem will see if you're fit
The sky is no longer blue
It only whos how you hate your foe too
Grayness and clouds cover the land
Your foe now wishing they had held your hand
All your memorys clouded by the fog
Wishing you could remeber just one, even if it was of your dog
so take your last drag *takes drag*(i really did when writing this)
and hopefully your foe will throw that last frag
The war is now over but your foe is still no lover
no need to run, no need to cover
no more shots fired
no more reasons to be tired
we all rest in peace



thats just how i feel about wars and all these ppl i tihnk are my friends but really arent they all cause too much drama
ya not really like me i guess but well there it is

Bro DZ
11-09-2004, 05:35 PM
eh? how the hell did you take a drag at school while you where writing this even though you seem to have been on a computer all morning? LoL

sToNeDpEnGuIn420
11-09-2004, 05:37 PM
it was yesterday after a school when my 2 friends(one being ride) had to do detion so me and my other friend had a cigg thats when i writed it then went back to the school and finished it

Bro DZ
11-09-2004, 05:43 PM
oh kk LoL

i just re-read your post in Dark Tuesday, my bad

cancer sticks are nasty kiddo, quit smoking em.

sToNeDpEnGuIn420
11-09-2004, 11:00 PM
im trying to quit them thats why im smoking shisha instead...lower nicitone and not as bad i guess?

never 2 much
11-10-2004, 05:57 AM
hmm..if you do quit let me know how you did it..and if you really did quit...
im trying too!