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11-09-2004, 05:30 PM #1OPSenior Member
a poem i wrote while listening to tool
Reach within to hold the hand of your foe
But just remeber, an eye for an eye and a toe for a toe
Losing your mind in this battle of wits
This test of tiem will see if you're fit
The sky is no longer blue
It only whos how you hate your foe too
Grayness and clouds cover the land
Your foe now wishing they had held your hand
All your memorys clouded by the fog
Wishing you could remeber just one, even if it was of your dog
so take your last drag *takes drag*(i really did when writing this)
and hopefully your foe will throw that last frag
The war is now over but your foe is still no lover
no need to run, no need to cover
no more shots fired
no more reasons to be tired
we all rest in peace
thats just how i feel about wars and all these ppl i tihnk are my friends but really arent they all cause too much drama
ya not really like me i guess but well there it issToNeDpEnGuIn420 Reviewed by sToNeDpEnGuIn420 on . a poem i wrote while listening to tool Reach within to hold the hand of your foe But just remeber, an eye for an eye and a toe for a toe Losing your mind in this battle of wits This test of tiem will see if you're fit The sky is no longer blue It only whos how you hate your foe too Grayness and clouds cover the land Your foe now wishing they had held your hand All your memorys clouded by the fog Wishing you could remeber just one, even if it was of your dog Rating: 5
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11-09-2004, 05:35 PM #2Senior Member
a poem i wrote while listening to tool
eh? how the hell did you take a drag at school while you where writing this even though you seem to have been on a computer all morning? LoL
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11-09-2004, 05:37 PM #3OPSenior Member
a poem i wrote while listening to tool
it was yesterday after a school when my 2 friends(one being ride) had to do detion so me and my other friend had a cigg thats when i writed it then went back to the school and finished it
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11-09-2004, 05:43 PM #4Senior Member
a poem i wrote while listening to tool
oh kk LoL
i just re-read your post in Dark Tuesday, my bad
cancer sticks are nasty kiddo, quit smoking em.
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11-09-2004, 11:00 PM #5OPSenior Member
a poem i wrote while listening to tool
im trying to quit them thats why im smoking shisha instead...lower nicitone and not as bad i guess?
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11-10-2004, 05:57 AM #6Senior Member
a poem i wrote while listening to tool
hmm..if you do quit let me know how you did it..and if you really did quit...
im trying too!If your aint choke\'n, your not smoke\'n!
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