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couch-potato
02-19-2008, 03:05 AM
Autobiography in Five Short Chapters

by Portia Nelson

I. I walk down the street.
There's a deep hole in the sidewalk. I fall in. I am lost.....I am helpless;
it isn't my fault. It takes forever to find a way out.
II. I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk. I pretend I don't see it. I fall in again. I can't believe I am in the same place;
but it isn't my fault. It still takes a long time to get out.

III. I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk. I see it is there. I still fall in....it's a habit.
My eyes are open. I know where I am. It is my fault. I get out immediately.

IV. I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk. I walk around it.
V. I walk down a different street.

apocolips31
02-19-2008, 03:09 AM
hmmm deep stuff man.

Metaphor
02-19-2008, 03:42 AM
once i fell in a hole too.
it was a bottomless pit.
The only thing pulling me further and further
was the one thing i thought i loved.

Ill still remember the feeling
of sinking
deeper and deeper
not knowing if i would make it out
if i would breathe the air again

One day she came along and threw me a rope
i eventually got out and
she helped me to stand upright
and thats where ive been ever since.

but since shes gone now
i cant help but peer into the abyss

and im loosing my footing.