Freestyle Rapper's Where you at???

[FreeVenice]

I was having alot of songs in my head today, and I have been chillin listening to alot of Old-Skool beats. I started to wonder, how many of you out there write rhymes, or just good poetry? I was thinking we start a small Freestyle contest here, or just start a thread where people post some chill thoughts. . .

We know you got it in you, lets put down for CannDotcom and it's crew. . .lol faded









and I don't want anybody on here trying to imitate, plz "keep it real" and original. but hey if you want to reword a song that might be a good laugh. . .

[FreeVenice]

For fun I am going to write something now. . .



I'm sittiing here chillin thinking about my future,
Today's sak, these panic attacks, and all this damn heat stress.
Growin herb, it's something I would do,
but these cops they can't handle it.
Reefers locked in cabnet,
stored away, blockin UV rays.
The police they don't trust me,
watching waiting to bust me.
I hear the birds fly by,
I see the crime rate rise.
But forget about that,
I got a bill on a sak,
Smoking a blunt after work so I can see clearly.
Looking at the world through a cloud of Venice buds.
And Thats life, thats where it's at.
Thats the place you go just to get some contact.
Now It's friday, and I don't give a fuck about tuesday.
It'll come when it comes, till then I'm smoking bowls.
Just laying here, thinking. . .
about my future, and now this damn cat.
Sleeping on my bed, not worrying for this and that.
But i guess that's why I hate them,
living their life that "God" gave them.
As I remain in my shell,
having you to tell.
About these panic attacks, and all this damn heat stress...


lol I can continue but from what I see it's a lost cause. . .lol

[FreeVenice]

lol, I was high. . .

[FreeVenice]

I don't think anyone even comes to these music rooms lol

[RedRainDrop]

Here's a rap freestyle me and 2 of my buddies made earlier today.....
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Dodger
Yo,blunts lit, with a twisted wit
my mindsets split from a mushroom trip
When dodger's rhymes hit, vacate the premises
it's bliss to cause shit, from simple verbal spits

You'll flip, as i sideswipe you in a van
Blood soaked hands, my bullets flood the banks
cash on hand, smash your figure till you can't stand
Devilish dodger come to show you who's the fuckin' man

Dayo
I'm the best at this rap game
cocaine is what brings me the fame
if you fallin to me, you'll be the only one to blame
your rap shit will burn in flames
there's nothing left but coals,
I"ll leave your body with fuckin bullet holes
Me and my boys will fuck you up
from this motherfucking liquor that we put in your cup
so throw it up....

RPk
Yoooooo RPK........
Yo end your life, with my knife
I'm so fucking trife
Rhyme illa, blood spilla, most known killa
RPK is what they call me, R.I.P is what you gonna be
can't you see homie, I' m the most lyrically gifted rapper they be

Dodger
Three rings of fire, the 3 rappers you desire.....

Listen to the song itself before you judge the lyrics.

[OniEhtRedrum781]

Here's a rap freestyle me and 2 of my buddies made earlier today.....
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Dodger
Yo,blunts lit, with a twisted wit
my mindsets split from a mushroom trip
When dodger's rhymes hit, vacate the premises
it's bliss to cause shit, from simple verbal spits

You'll flip, as i sideswipe you in a van
Blood soaked hands, my bullets flood the banks
cash on hand, smash your figure till you can't stand
Devilish dodger come to show you who's the fuckin' man

Dayo
I'm the best at this rap game
cocaine is what brings me the fame
if you fallin to me, you'll be the only one to blame
your rap shit will burn in flames
there's nothing left but coals,
I"ll leave your body with fuckin bullet holes
Me and my boys will fuck you up
from this motherfucking liquor that we put in your cup
so throw it up....

RPk
Yoooooo RPK........
Yo end your life, with my knife
I'm so fucking trife
Rhyme illa, blood spilla, most known killa
RPK is what they call me, R.I.P is what you gonna be
can't you see homie, I' m the most lyrically gifted rapper they be

Dodger
Three rings of fire, the 3 rappers you desire.....

Listen to the song itself before you judge the lyrics.

no offense but that was pretty weak man...

They call me DaMaJa cuz I'm always wrecking havoc
Bustin' bitches up with my semi-automatic
the way the 'K shells flip, they're fuckin' acrobatic
I don't fuck with snitches homie, that could be problematic
The difference between me and you is I'm charismatic
The kinda guy that comes up and leaves the bitches ecstatic
And before I end this and make it climatic
Feel free to hate
If you couldn't that would be undemocratic

[reezykeezy]

ay yo if you gotta problem
i let the gun solve em
lookin fresha than a mothafucker cocaine pushin
the .45 to the grill leave the forehead mushin
doin it real large here in the BAY out west
dont set foot out on the yard without a 50 cent vest
fireworks blazin and it aint the 4th of july
you hear a POP then a FLOP an another mother cry
the blood rolls out on the hot black street
dome peice lookin like some chucked red meat
now i can rest knowin that i popped ya
tried to have my homie come on the turf and stop a
bitch made like yourself pushin cain on my block
you payed the price fool, with a mouthful of glock
a yo if ya gotta problem
I LET THE GUN SOLVE EM

[StonedAssasin]

I'll rip your chest OPEN
my 12 gauge busts back in repetetive MOTION
On the BLOCK with twin GLOCKS pinchin COPS
for tryin to bust me for ROCKS in ma SOCKS
fat stacks bulgin out ma JEANS
So hot my ears blow out STEAM
I get that BLOW MONEY cause ***** i KNOW MONEY
still sittin on white bricks, wrapped in DUCK TAPE
thirty minutes flat i can bake a whole CAKE
twin glocks in my HANDS, they neva had a CHANCE
dropped 60 grand just to hold up my PANTS
I be that young chico on the Bottom of the MAP
keep a 50 round clip on the Bottom of the STRAP
Betta call yo crew, you gon NEED HELP
The whole car strapped, and I aint talkin bout SEAT BELTS
you lil *****s best keep ma NAME outcha MOUF
100 rounds make a FRAME outcha HOUSE
So if ya see me on your BLOCK PUMPIN
yall betta get to HOPPIN, RUNNIN.

Thats just a lil sumn.. I wish I could spit it on a beat so yall could hear it better

[StonedAssasin]

This is basically the same one... but I tried to fix it up a bit I kinda ran through it the first time and when I tried to edit it it had been 10 mins over.. well here ya go

I'll rip your chest OPEN
my 12 gauge busts back in repetetive MOTION
24's stay ROLLIN, cocaine HOLDIN
My twin GLOCKS, Pinch COPS, fo tryina bust me slangin ROCKS.
fat stacks bulgin out ma JEANS
Im So hot my ears blowin out STEAM
I get that BLOW MONEY cause ***** i KNOW MONEY
still sittin on white bricks, wrapped in DUCK TAPE
thirty minutes flat i can bake a whole CAKE
twin glocks in my HANDS, yall neva had a CHANCE
Droppin 100 dolla billz just to watch these bitches DANCE
I be that young chico on the Bottom of the MAP
keep a 50 round clip on the Bottom of the STRAP
Homie you best call yo crew, you gon NEED HELP
The whole car strapped, and I aint talkin bout SEAT BELTS
you lil *****s best keep ma NAME outcha MOUF
100 rounds make a FRAME outcha HOUSE
So if ya see me on your BLOCK PUMPIN, and ROCK PUSHIN
yall betta get to HOPPIN RUNNIN, 'fore I take your head off yo SHOULDAS
Down south chico stay kickin dem BOULDAS

[RedRainDrop]

oh and rain drop could you send me your freestyle man?, i'd like to here it with the beat

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[StonedAssasin]

How can I make an audio file like that? so I can rip some shit at the top of my dome?

[FreeVenice]

Nice that this thread picked up. Lets see something done on the spot.

[chronicnhash]

ive never tried this shit here we go..

listen bout another day, naw son i aint talkin bout LA.
im talkin bout the HA, the, the, H motha fuckin A.
Yeaa see im down wit these gangs,
we pushin rock like it aint no thang.
i got thugs from the north to south,
east to west, bitch i can run my mouth.
it aint hard when u the king of the city,
down wit new york but man fuck diddy.
aight now back to the killer shit,
straight off the pot crack music kid.
see blocks get run up here to,
mothafuckas got ak's, and u got a 22.
so dont think u gonna test me,
cuz i always got a vest b.
why stay unarmed and die,
when i can stay armed and high.

im baked i hope it made sense

[RedRainDrop]

Skinny stoned kids, wearing bizarres latest CD ,
it's plain to see, your about to gain a nose bleed.
Cause if you wear d12, you dont keep the shotties on the shelf
Ask yourself, and he'll tell you, a tarot death card is dealt

[Juggnoxalo]

Newgrounds Presents: Audio by PurpleHaze (http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=508260)half the time you guys were offbeat no offense.

[FreeVenice]

Stfu Juggalo, It's not about just the beat anymore lol

[Oil_Man]

Skinny stoned kids, wearing bizarres latest CD ,
it's plain to see, your about to gain a nose bleed.
Cause if you wear d12, you dont keep the shotties on the shelf
Ask yourself, and he'll tell you, a tarot death card is dealt

aight u want beef well come on in,
tryin to dis bizarre, and the dirty dozen.
u weak sounded with them shotty lines,
on the shelf? bitch im poppin mine.
i got the m3, ak, and the nine.
they fully loaded, with them hollows,
everywhere i go, fuckin beef follows.
but its oookkk,
i got the akkkk,
and the ruger sprays,
tell ur bodys hauled away.
then i go home, to the stash,
lookin for the CHRONICNHASH.
he got the whole block locked up,
heaters stashed up,
blunts rolled up,
ready for another click to fuck up.


rip bugz, proof

[chronicnhash]

nice^

ever since i was 16 yrs old,
i been rappin for the *****s in the north 0,
got the police on my payroll,
when shits deep ***** i lay loow.

me and oil man smokin this droo,
three wheelin in the six-foo,
we got clips and pounds of yayo
and ur wife...aka one of my hoes.

now back to this beef yo,
why i gotta stay pushin thos o's,
when we come nowhere u can go,
and thats just the way it goes,
ever since i was 16 yrs old

[Oil_Man]

D12 on some realshit!!! Redraindrop
you may be banned but this ones for you boy!

Come on all holla at 3-0-6
We come up in here with the kicks
You cant hear my shit on the radio
My shit will throw up your shit
an shoot it 6 time before it comes back down
Yeah thats it, Your a bitch
thats right, i did i called you a bitch
You aint gonna do shit about it
Its really comin down on you boy
you gonna run out this, an forget all your dough
Chronic gonna be left behind, cos u dont sling
And you mite as well just leave that bling
RedRainDrop, Man that aint rain thats your blood
an with your blood imma cos a flood
derty harry kicks your ass even tho he R-I-P
Bizzare Be some crazy shit, hes a G
Swifty Mcvay, Hes Comin all the way
Kuniva will come an you aint gonna see 24
Kon Artis gonna make you waste deep
Slim Shady 70 mill records sold an countin
EEEEHH holla! so next time you be comin messin
with the dirty dozen, ya better be strapped

[Piff Smoker]

I'll rip your chest OPEN
my 12 gauge busts back in repetetive MOTION
On the BLOCK with twin GLOCKS pinchin COPS
for tryin to bust me for ROCKS in ma SOCKS
fat stacks bulgin out ma JEANS
So hot my ears blow out STEAM
I get that BLOW MONEY cause ***** i KNOW MONEY
still sittin on white bricks, wrapped in DUCK TAPE
thirty minutes flat i can bake a whole CAKE
twin glocks in my HANDS, they neva had a CHANCE
dropped 60 grand just to hold up my PANTS
I be that young chico on the Bottom of the MAP
keep a 50 round clip on the Bottom of the STRAP
Betta call yo crew, you gon NEED HELP
The whole car strapped, and I aint talkin bout SEAT BELTS
you lil *****s best keep ma NAME outcha MOUF
100 rounds make a FRAME outcha HOUSE
So if ya see me on your BLOCK PUMPIN
yall betta get to HOPPIN, RUNNIN.

Thats just a lil sumn.. I wish I could spit it on a beat so yall could hear it better

Thats Lyrics From A Young Jeezy Song If U Put That On A Beat U Would Go To Jail... lol

[TopNotchSwagger220]

we should get sum battles goin on here, ill get at whoever in the lyrical crossfires, so get at the kid wit a rap...im peacefully waitin

[MagicalHerb]

lions rap bubble wrap snap baby clap to the light of the lantern lap

[Juggalo k00kie]

*sigh*... seems i have to do this again.. take notes people, i'm only putting down 10 bars

first off, major props to my big homie Stak/
you ain't down with the movement? suck on me sack//
that's probably why your breath stinks in the first place/
the streets tell me you're suckin dick all day//
known by most to be as sick as they come/
a mix of August's Underground and Satan//
i'm always game to pull a drive by and bust your ass/
in broke ass hoopties with mac 10s and a Sutter mask//
think i'm bluffin, bitch shoulda thought again/
you can get fucked up just like your lot of friends//

[Juggalo k00kie]

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LMAO that kid sucks horribly i give him a 2/10

[choppile420]

Yall a bunch uh violent mutha fuckers haha. no offense mans.. Heres my freestyle.. sorry if its too long. PM me with what you think:)

I may be white, I may be young. Pick a fight ill show you what i do for fun. take a second to listen to me and maybe youll see im not a punk white kid you see around. Ask me to smoke and you know im down, down to smoke tell that bag is gone, down to chop a pile and smoke it through a bong. I know im high cause in a while my eyes will bleed red as fuck, thats what happens when you smoke weed.
Me, mike, and my bro, choppin piles for years and years, every time the piles gone we chop some mo, chop till we drop, thats how we do, pack the powl hard as fuck, light it up and pull it through. sittin in my garage listenen to Kottonmouth Kings, we never thought about a thing, always dreamin of smokin with the kings.
At first i didnt know what was what, didnt know the government was so fucked up, they throw you in jail, for smokin a plant, these days you try somethin fun but you cant, they take away our rights, but not with out a fight. theyre so unfair it makes me wanna cry, almost brings a tear to my eye, most people dont even care, millions of people sittin in jail for smokein weed? so i say fuck the popo's plant your seeds smoke the plant, even when they say you cant.
Alcohol and tobacco kill hundreds all the time, weed cant kill if you smoke pounds and pounds or just a dime. smokin marijuana shouldnt be a crime, if you think im wrong your already blind, blind from all the lies they feed you, people like me, there are only a few, so unite, fuck the others, HEAR THE TRUTH!
Peace...

[ghosty]

guess i better jump in too
not giving a lesson, but heres a little run through
just cashed a session, in an hour we'll do 2
ghosty, on the track and you know i stay true
rise and shine bright and early gotta make that dough
get it all done in the morning and go home to the ho
noon time comin up take a minute for lunch
them bowls i just smoked got me ready to munch
and when i finish, you know it's time for a refresher
head to the backyard pull the weed from the dresser
and it's summer summer summer time
sunshine on my face got me feelin fine
bud in my system got me feelin sublime
gotta keep going strong so some day i'll get mine


thats all i got right now, not my best

[choppile420]

I smoke alot of bud,
Trust me it aint no dud shit,
I smoke the gooey ooey green,
The shit that makes ya feen,
But never ever makes ya mean,
Gets you high as a kite,
Man this shits fucking tyte,
And even though im white,
throw a fist,
and ill throw all kinds a shit,
ill be all crazy like
a fucking monkey on crack,
the shits wack
when they start to hatin,
Im not waitin,
to kick alot of hatin ass,
especially if they upper class,
Than i really woop theyre ass.

Haha, not the greatest.

[Juggalo k00kie]

anybody wanna battle me.. look up my Juggalo k00kie |VS| anyone thread