Freestyle Rapper's Where you at???

[FreeVenice]

I was having alot of songs in my head today, and I have been chillin listening to alot of Old-Skool beats. I started to wonder, how many of you out there write rhymes, or just good poetry? I was thinking we start a small Freestyle contest here, or just start a thread where people post some chill thoughts. . .

We know you got it in you, lets put down for CannDotcom and it's crew. . .lol faded









and I don't want anybody on here trying to imitate, plz "keep it real" and original. but hey if you want to reword a song that might be a good laugh. . .

FreeVenice Reviewed by FreeVenice on 06-15-2007. Freestyle Rapper's Where you at??? I was having alot of songs in my head today, and I have been chillin listening to alot of Old-Skool beats. I started to wonder, how many of you out there write rhymes, or just good poetry? I was thinking we start a small Freestyle contest here, or just start a thread where people post some chill thoughts. . . We know you got it in you, lets put down for CannDotcom and it's crew. . .lol faded Rating: 5

[FreeVenice]

For fun I am going to write something now. . .



I'm sittiing here chillin thinking about my future,
Today's sak, these panic attacks, and all this damn heat stress.
Growin herb, it's something I would do,
but these cops they can't handle it.
Reefers locked in cabnet,
stored away, blockin UV rays.
The police they don't trust me,
watching waiting to bust me.
I hear the birds fly by,
I see the crime rate rise.
But forget about that,
I got a bill on a sak,
Smoking a blunt after work so I can see clearly.
Looking at the world through a cloud of Venice buds.
And Thats life, thats where it's at.
Thats the place you go just to get some contact.
Now It's friday, and I don't give a fuck about tuesday.
It'll come when it comes, till then I'm smoking bowls.
Just laying here, thinking. . .
about my future, and now this damn cat.
Sleeping on my bed, not worrying for this and that.
But i guess that's why I hate them,
living their life that "God" gave them.
As I remain in my shell,
having you to tell.
About these panic attacks, and all this damn heat stress...


lol I can continue but from what I see it's a lost cause. . .lol

[FreeVenice]

lol, I was high. . .

[FreeVenice]

I don't think anyone even comes to these music rooms lol

[RedRainDrop]

Here's a rap freestyle me and 2 of my buddies made earlier today.....
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Dodger
Yo,blunts lit, with a twisted wit
my mindsets split from a mushroom trip
When dodger's rhymes hit, vacate the premises
it's bliss to cause shit, from simple verbal spits

You'll flip, as i sideswipe you in a van
Blood soaked hands, my bullets flood the banks
cash on hand, smash your figure till you can't stand
Devilish dodger come to show you who's the fuckin' man

Dayo
I'm the best at this rap game
cocaine is what brings me the fame
if you fallin to me, you'll be the only one to blame
your rap shit will burn in flames
there's nothing left but coals,
I"ll leave your body with fuckin bullet holes
Me and my boys will fuck you up
from this motherfucking liquor that we put in your cup
so throw it up....

RPk
Yoooooo RPK........
Yo end your life, with my knife
I'm so fucking trife
Rhyme illa, blood spilla, most known killa
RPK is what they call me, R.I.P is what you gonna be
can't you see homie, I' m the most lyrically gifted rapper they be

Dodger
Three rings of fire, the 3 rappers you desire.....

Listen to the song itself before you judge the lyrics.

[OniEhtRedrum781]

Here's a rap freestyle me and 2 of my buddies made earlier today.....
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Dodger
Yo,blunts lit, with a twisted wit
my mindsets split from a mushroom trip
When dodger's rhymes hit, vacate the premises
it's bliss to cause shit, from simple verbal spits

You'll flip, as i sideswipe you in a van
Blood soaked hands, my bullets flood the banks
cash on hand, smash your figure till you can't stand
Devilish dodger come to show you who's the fuckin' man

Dayo
I'm the best at this rap game
cocaine is what brings me the fame
if you fallin to me, you'll be the only one to blame
your rap shit will burn in flames
there's nothing left but coals,
I"ll leave your body with fuckin bullet holes
Me and my boys will fuck you up
from this motherfucking liquor that we put in your cup
so throw it up....

RPk
Yoooooo RPK........
Yo end your life, with my knife
I'm so fucking trife
Rhyme illa, blood spilla, most known killa
RPK is what they call me, R.I.P is what you gonna be
can't you see homie, I' m the most lyrically gifted rapper they be

Dodger
Three rings of fire, the 3 rappers you desire.....

Listen to the song itself before you judge the lyrics.

no offense but that was pretty weak man...

They call me DaMaJa cuz I'm always wrecking havoc
Bustin' bitches up with my semi-automatic
the way the 'K shells flip, they're fuckin' acrobatic
I don't fuck with snitches homie, that could be problematic
The difference between me and you is I'm charismatic
The kinda guy that comes up and leaves the bitches ecstatic
And before I end this and make it climatic
Feel free to hate
If you couldn't that would be undemocratic

[reezykeezy]

ay yo if you gotta problem
i let the gun solve em
lookin fresha than a mothafucker cocaine pushin
the .45 to the grill leave the forehead mushin
doin it real large here in the BAY out west
dont set foot out on the yard without a 50 cent vest
fireworks blazin and it aint the 4th of july
you hear a POP then a FLOP an another mother cry
the blood rolls out on the hot black street
dome peice lookin like some chucked red meat
now i can rest knowin that i popped ya
tried to have my homie come on the turf and stop a
bitch made like yourself pushin cain on my block
you payed the price fool, with a mouthful of glock
a yo if ya gotta problem
I LET THE GUN SOLVE EM

[StonedAssasin]

I'll rip your chest OPEN
my 12 gauge busts back in repetetive MOTION
On the BLOCK with twin GLOCKS pinchin COPS
for tryin to bust me for ROCKS in ma SOCKS
fat stacks bulgin out ma JEANS
So hot my ears blow out STEAM
I get that BLOW MONEY cause ***** i KNOW MONEY
still sittin on white bricks, wrapped in DUCK TAPE
thirty minutes flat i can bake a whole CAKE
twin glocks in my HANDS, they neva had a CHANCE
dropped 60 grand just to hold up my PANTS
I be that young chico on the Bottom of the MAP
keep a 50 round clip on the Bottom of the STRAP
Betta call yo crew, you gon NEED HELP
The whole car strapped, and I aint talkin bout SEAT BELTS
you lil *****s best keep ma NAME outcha MOUF
100 rounds make a FRAME outcha HOUSE
So if ya see me on your BLOCK PUMPIN
yall betta get to HOPPIN, RUNNIN.

Thats just a lil sumn.. I wish I could spit it on a beat so yall could hear it better

[StonedAssasin]

This is basically the same one... but I tried to fix it up a bit I kinda ran through it the first time and when I tried to edit it it had been 10 mins over.. well here ya go

I'll rip your chest OPEN
my 12 gauge busts back in repetetive MOTION
24's stay ROLLIN, cocaine HOLDIN
My twin GLOCKS, Pinch COPS, fo tryina bust me slangin ROCKS.
fat stacks bulgin out ma JEANS
Im So hot my ears blowin out STEAM
I get that BLOW MONEY cause ***** i KNOW MONEY
still sittin on white bricks, wrapped in DUCK TAPE
thirty minutes flat i can bake a whole CAKE
twin glocks in my HANDS, yall neva had a CHANCE
Droppin 100 dolla billz just to watch these bitches DANCE
I be that young chico on the Bottom of the MAP
keep a 50 round clip on the Bottom of the STRAP
Homie you best call yo crew, you gon NEED HELP
The whole car strapped, and I aint talkin bout SEAT BELTS
you lil *****s best keep ma NAME outcha MOUF
100 rounds make a FRAME outcha HOUSE
So if ya see me on your BLOCK PUMPIN, and ROCK PUSHIN
yall betta get to HOPPIN RUNNIN, 'fore I take your head off yo SHOULDAS
Down south chico stay kickin dem BOULDAS

[RedRainDrop]

oh and rain drop could you send me your freestyle man?, i'd like to here it with the beat

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