poam for english

[originalblu]

wonder what the teachers gonna say when i get this back

saterday campfire

"A place to chill, to have some fun
where minds excape, the light of sun
where always open, a seat to sit
lacking pressure, if one wish to quit
were every night, we always cheers
then smoke a blunt and drink some beers
a small retreat, a time for brake
to forget about, life's headache
were storys speak, to ears that listion
as time passes, eyes start to glisten
with my last toke, i stood and spoke
for all to hear, drink up your beer
and all be merry, now hit this shit
for its still cherry :rasta:

[couch-potato]

Hopefully she reads your poam on a saterday.

[Samwhore]

damn, I was thinking about those same typos, CP, the poem makes me think of that last scene in Dazed and Confused, where everyones leaving and its all sad as everyone says goodbye.

[slipknotpsycho]

let me know what she says i wanna know too :stoned:

[NightProwler]

yeah lol tell us what she says

[originalblu]

its a guys teacher and i hope hes not gonna be pissed

[notransfer]

youuuu didnnnntt suubmittt thatttttt

[BabyFacedAbortion]

you'd better hope he doesn't drug test you

for two reasons..

a) Stupid idea for SCHOOL. Decent poEm though.
b) POEM.

[slipknotpsycho]

lol i wasn't gonna say shit about your spelling, but it just occured to me... this is for english class... :wtf: you might wanna proof read/spell check your work in the future... :thumbsup: just a tip.

[originalblu]

i was never a good speller

[Nissan_420sx]

yea for an english class..i'm pretty sure reguardless of what it's about...your not gonna get too good of a grade for that spelling

[Its a Plant]

Hahaha :S2:

I'm assuming you aren't really handing that in, but hey, I've been wrong before..

I don't think your teacher would appreciate the cursing, beer, and weed references, either. "Where'd ya learn that Cheech, DRUUUG school?" :p

Unless you're asking for trouble. In that case, turn it in and sit back. ~

[originalblu]

you'd better hope he doesn't drug test you

for two reasons..

a) Stupid idea for SCHOOL. Decent poEm though.
b) POEM.

he cant drug test me

[BabyFacedAbortion]

Sweetheart, any mention of drug or alcohol use during school hours, can lead to drug testing. You may not realize it, but while in high school, you are basically powerless. Shit, in my school, if you put your head down on your desk for too long they can drug test you.

[MacWQ33]

LOL...I did something like that Senior year, but I wasn't that 'open'. We had to describe like a utopia or something, kind of like you.

It was more like...(paraphrased for parts containing substance use)

The smoke swirls through the air as it's inhaled, held deeply, and exhaled, creating a relaxing mindstate, the aroma strong...the liquids from the cup are soaked into the body, the effect being a smile...the white sand shot up the nostrils to create a euphoria unlike any other.

I think I'll always remember that one assignment...everyone told me not to hand it in....

95% I believe (A).

[Samwhore]

BFA is right, schools can do whatever they want, there the government nazis

[originalblu]

^^ alot of the teachers in my school are chill about smokin,, 70% of the students smoke,, teachers hear kids talkin about it and dont care,, 4 of the teachers i know smoke,, the only way for gettin in troble really is smokin on school grounds like in the bathrooms or somthin

i dont think i'll get tested