poam for english

[originalblu]

wonder what the teachers gonna say when i get this back

saterday campfire

"A place to chill, to have some fun
where minds excape, the light of sun
where always open, a seat to sit
lacking pressure, if one wish to quit
were every night, we always cheers
then smoke a blunt and drink some beers
a small retreat, a time for brake
to forget about, life's headache
were storys speak, to ears that listion
as time passes, eyes start to glisten
with my last toke, i stood and spoke
for all to hear, drink up your beer
and all be merry, now hit this shit
for its still cherry :rasta:

originalblu Reviewed by originalblu on 03-29-2007. poam for english wonder what the teachers gonna say when i get this back saterday campfire "A place to chill, to have some fun where minds excape, the light of sun where always open, a seat to sit lacking pressure, if one wish to quit were every night, we always cheers then smoke a blunt and drink some beers Rating: 5

[couch-potato]

Hopefully she reads your poam on a saterday.

[Samwhore]

damn, I was thinking about those same typos, CP, the poem makes me think of that last scene in Dazed and Confused, where everyones leaving and its all sad as everyone says goodbye.

[slipknotpsycho]

let me know what she says i wanna know too :stoned:

[NightProwler]

yeah lol tell us what she says

[originalblu]

its a guys teacher and i hope hes not gonna be pissed

[notransfer]

youuuu didnnnntt suubmittt thatttttt

[BabyFacedAbortion]

you'd better hope he doesn't drug test you

for two reasons..

a) Stupid idea for SCHOOL. Decent poEm though.
b) POEM.

[slipknotpsycho]

lol i wasn't gonna say shit about your spelling, but it just occured to me... this is for english class... :wtf: you might wanna proof read/spell check your work in the future... :thumbsup: just a tip.

[originalblu]

i was never a good speller