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12-07-2004, 09:17 AM #1
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Looking for story feedback...
I missed the part when youre dad pulls the J out of his pocket and after lighting up you totally have a "moment" with him...
Eh?BradPitt Reviewed by BradPitt on . Looking for story feedback... I'd appreciate feedback on this. I know it's long, but anything would be a great help! The Ride Home Half day left, and seven cigarettes. Iā??ve never smoked so frequently before; does he get to me that much? Why the hell did I ask to go back for such a goddamned stupid reason? I donā??t give a ratā??s ass about politics, but I need money. I could probably get enough from him to afford tobacco until thanksgiving, if I keep hold of some sort of budget. Let me see, Sunday dinners usually run Rating: 5
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