holy fucking shit i cant believe i read that whole god damn story! well its kinda boring and pointless well i guess not pointless but definately boring. i also notice a couple mispelled words and "typos" like an 'I' was suppose to be 'It' and also ??Didn??t John tell you I smoked with him a few months ago??
I felt like my head was about to explode! My father had smoked with my brother! Just a few years blah, blah , blah" you say months then years? hmm well which one is it? and also there was a 'to' that was suppose to be 'two'. and i also had a little trouble following who was talkin. i guess it wasnt that bad of a story all together though. not bad.