good read man
i liked it, i have no input seeing as how jagged pretty much covered it all
i didnt really punctuate my story, but if you wanna read it for the content that would be great
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MastaChronic Reviewed by MastaChronic on . Some help please. Hey all, as some of you know I enjoy writing. But as I expressed in another thread my writing skills aren't all that great. The thing is, I have just written a short story and was wondering if you guys think it's any good. I'm open to any criticism, even if you feel the need to express how shit it is lol. So please, read it, and be honest. A couple sat together one night sharing thoughts. They had spoken about dreams quite attentively, the women had explained to her lover how she often Rating: 5