Quote Originally Posted by geonagual
It was good. But I think the scene could of been set a little better, if you get what I am saying.
Yeah I understand. I could try explaining the mood a bit more I guess. I just didn't want to make it too long since it's harder. Plus it's better as a short read.
Nation_1ne Reviewed by Nation_1ne on . Some help please. Hey all, as some of you know I enjoy writing. But as I expressed in another thread my writing skills aren't all that great. The thing is, I have just written a short story and was wondering if you guys think it's any good. I'm open to any criticism, even if you feel the need to express how shit it is lol. So please, read it, and be honest. A couple sat together one night sharing thoughts. They had spoken about dreams quite attentively, the women had explained to her lover how she often Rating: 5