Quote Originally Posted by TheFatKid
I'm going to check my email right now, even though I doubt they replied. I'm trying to practice writing every chance I get because I want to go to college to major in either English, Philosophy, or business. English class is a complete waste, all we do is read Romeo and Juliet and review literary terms.
In that case I have a small suggestion: the analogy you made wasnt comletely parallel. Even though you got the point across, having parallel analogies is always better.