Quote Originally Posted by blazed620
K...most ppl didn't like my "half-assed" rap i wrote. SO here's a poem i wrote, prolly a year ago. Read it and tell me what you think of it. I know its not perfect, so your feedback is appreciated

Its the end of the world as we know it
Earth is getting older, and it's starting to show it
The wear and the tear, showing everywhere
Some people worry, others don't care

Were killing each other, and then sending more
President says...." We're winning the war"
2001 is the time we did enter..
But since then, more soldiers died than in the trade center

Showing its revenge, a tsunami does come
Totaling South-Asia, practically killing everyone
280,000 dead, covering 12 countries in all
But mother nature wasn't finished, as we started to fall

North America is the one with tornadoes and such
But as if destruction of the Mid-West wasn't enough
Off the east coast It's hurricane season
Killing hundreds, maybe thousands, for no apparent reason

Destruction of the Earth is definitely evident
Killing people is no problem, for our U.S. president
Sending soldiers to war, is like a life we do wager
Saving lives would be easy, if we could just predict mother nature

But, it's the end of the world as we know it
Earth is getting older, and it's starting to show it
The wear and the tear, showing everywhere
Some people worry, but others don't care
I actually think thats very good, and very true.
LIP Reviewed by LIP on . End of the World (poem i wrote) K...most ppl didn't like my "half-assed" rap i wrote. SO here's a poem i wrote, prolly a year ago. Read it and tell me what you think of it. I know its not perfect, so your feedback is appreciated Its the end of the world as we know it Earth is getting older, and it's starting to show it The wear and the tear, showing everywhere Some people worry, others don't care Were killing each other, and then sending more President says...." We're winning the war" 2001 is the time we did enter.. Rating: 5