Yep...REM in me head too...
use more vivid language...show me...don't tell me.
420izzle Reviewed by 420izzle on . End of the World (poem i wrote) K...most ppl didn't like my "half-assed" rap i wrote. SO here's a poem i wrote, prolly a year ago. Read it and tell me what you think of it. I know its not perfect, so your feedback is appreciated Its the end of the world as we know it Earth is getting older, and it's starting to show it The wear and the tear, showing everywhere Some people worry, others don't care Were killing each other, and then sending more President says...." We're winning the war" 2001 is the time we did enter.. Rating: 5