Short rap I wrote

[MaryjaneAndHashley]

Ok so i like to write things, wether it be songs, raps, poetry, whatever. Well i was bored a second ago and wrote this short little rap, took me about 10 minutes. Just tell me what you think and critique it or whatever. And please ppl, DONT post YOUR songs, or raps

I get a sensation when I penetrate the teenage generation
It's insane when, I open her fuckin' mouth and fuck her fuckin' brains in
And I'm not changin, you better trust that
Infact, I'll blast your wack ass if your talkin that trash
Or I'll snag your stash and turn that green into some nasty ash
Smash the glass in your bachelor pad and watch me laugh
This jackass thinks this is all a joke
Just watch me toke as you see all your dreams go up in smoke

Sounds good, I luv ur avv

Giggity-Giggity-goo.
heh! heh! alllllllllllrite.