Great paper! Other then a few minor grammatical mistakes, the body was very solid, engaging, and informative. The only problem I saw was with the introductory paragraph and conclusion paragraph. The thesis seemed to be that the war on Illegal Drugs was immoral and a failure, but the paper soley focused on marijauna. I'm not saying this was bad at all, merely that you should change the war on "Illegal Drugs" to a war on marijauna.
Zohar Reviewed by Zohar on . "The War On Drugs" an Essay by me Ok, So I've been up all night(the the help of my friend Adderall) writing this paper, I hope it makes some sense. I was supposed to define a term and then give my thoughts on it. Hope you enjoy :D Nicholas Edward Brady Symposium - Luke Mancuso Definition Essay "The War on Drugs" Drugs. Illegal Drugs to be more specific. The emotions that this simple word invokes in many people are so strong that it has become a centerpiece in our modern culture. It seems as if everyone has their Rating: 5