Great paper! Other then a few minor grammatical mistakes, the body was very solid, engaging, and informative. The only problem I saw was with the introductory paragraph and conclusion paragraph. The thesis seemed to be that the war on Illegal Drugs was immoral and a failure, but the paper soley focused on marijauna. I'm not saying this was bad at all, merely that you should change the war on "Illegal Drugs" to a war on marijauna.