If you school is so small, why don't you just go talk to this person?

My sister went to Yale and fought for the new finaid rules they have now. If your parent(s) make under 40k combined, you have a free ride. Can i ask what school this is? Also, as far as your letter is concerned, it is ENTIRELY too long. Cut it in half.

Coming from an Ivy League family, i never understood the importance of such a lavish and expensive education. The president of my school is now the Secretary of Defense.