if youlike rap

[deltron]

he heard ace rock but got lost in the first verse!:jointsmile:

dude that was so appropriate. haha

[Matt the Funk]

You sound too much like a wanna-be technique........

[BigHyphyD]

You sound too much like a wanna-be technique........

Yeah....I don't like to be nit-picky but his only flaw in his rapping style is that.

His first song "Pain" sounds just like "dance with the Devil"

[Matt the Funk]

Yeah....I don't like to be nit-picky but his only flaw in his rapping style is that.

His first song "Pain" sounds just like "dance with the Devil"

Yeah, I would suggest changing your sound and style a little bit so you don't sound like a technique rip-off and are respected more as your own artist.

[RIP ODB]

Don't quit ya day job!

Where have I heard the beat for the third song? The one with the dude singing on it? Where is that beat from?

[marvelous22]

I listen to the good rap you know Big L, Eazy-E, The Wu, NWA, Snoop and dre ( Old only), and some bone thugz.

[budsmoker only]

it wasnt bad.. but like others said make your songs longer.. and more verses for sure.. the second song, life is hard or w/e, towards the end you speed up all intense, then just go to chorus, i noticed that and thought it was weird.. but ya dude just keep ya head up, keep on doin what you love dont let other people or the "haters" stop you from doin what you love..

[Fluffhead]

you are absolutely a moron. have you ever heard any underground hip hop? aesop rock, atmosphere, cage, el-p, aotp, 7l & eso, c-rayz walz, last emperor, mac lethal, sokrates, murs.. fuck the list goes on... rare as shit my ass.

my guess is you sit there listening to 50 cent whining about how his music sucks.

dont lie about "gettin love" either because your tracks on myspace have like 10 hits each. hahah

Lol this would be funny if you were actually del tha funky homosapien. I know underground shit... All of the def jux crew,,, I actually met and chilled with c rayz walz whos a sick underground guy on def jux. I love rjd2 aesop rock el p and murs. The def jux label is the sickest in underground along with rawkus. and street executives is modern underground, rockin ray cash, who i have also chilled with. and krayzie bone.

[AR15]

suhl, u don get it but thats aight. i aint ever have a silver spoon kid... it is all about tha money for me.. and as to bein unsigned no shit homie erebody gotta start somewhere n ill hav u kno im havin managers wantin more so i am movin up regardless of what anyone says it is all about struggle friend somethin u obviously dont have much experience wit. when i do this rap shit, i do it for all my boys, my parents... its tha hope for betta life for all my fams... that inspired my music.. just because i get on a banger dont mean that thers no purpose behind it.. its just a style of music. dont sweat it kid... friendowl.. whatup killa.... u kno whats good

Hey, outside of the discussion, can you please learn how to fucking write? This is a forum, not some fucking chat room. "You" not 'u', "be" not 'b', etc... Talking with slang, rapping with it, whatever, but when you want to type something for people to read, do it without all that crap. When I want to type something for people to read, I leave out most slang so they can understand it. Let's take "erebody" for example. Why the fuck can't you just type "everybody." When you say it, you can fucking hear it, when you type it, you look fucking retarded. And it comes across as you trying to put yourself up as some hard mother fucker. It's not working and it's really pissing me off, I'm sure others find it annoying as hell. Good luck with your music, I listen to rap and I'll leave my opinion of it out of this. But please don't be a prick and start typing without all the useless crap in it.

[deltron]

Lol this would be funny if you were actually del tha funky homosapien. I know underground shit... All of the def jux crew,,, I actually met and chilled with c rayz walz whos a sick underground guy on def jux. I love rjd2 aesop rock el p and murs. The def jux label is the sickest in underground along with rawkus. and street executives is modern underground, rockin ray cash, who i have also chilled with. and krayzie bone.

Yo I smoked fatties with living legends when i went to see their show.. it was dope




"Rap ain't about bustin caps and fuckin bitches
It's about fluency with rhymin ingenuity"