rate my rap

[Prunedale]

Hmm did you have a hard upbringing?

I came up poor and my step dad was hard, but I never wanted to hurt anyone.. Why so aggressive? You don't play sports eh?

[systemofadown]

yo yo yo, workin at KFC,
Colonel sanders and me,
Making some extra crispy
Mashed potatos?
or sliced tomatos,
I'll show you where the cherry cobler goes,


There is my rap.

[systemofadown]

Plus, reading your rap makes me see that you're just as hypocritical and wrong as any christian. But that's ok I guess.

[Prunedale]

Thats the other thing about rap. To me.. again reffering to my experience.
When I run into someone they ask me what I do, I tell them and all of a sudden their a rapper. From raps or lyrics or poems you can understand what someones thinking inside their head, its common to have conflict inside your head but when you rap something it has to come very clean and to the point, this is why the "skill" when someone does have it, its rare and unique.

Fun to be into, I've been writing for a very long time and I'm still never really satisfied with my delivery and choice or words. Which is why I'm not a vocalist lol. I'll help people with theirs or make suggestions which is all I'm doing atm repying. In my work its touchy to suggest changing lyrics & verses. Being that if I help em change their song, I've just co-wrote the song. Makes em weary and usually we never go past thinking about a song which saves me time.

I encourage you to read. As much as you can. Empower yourself dog, you need ammunition if you wanna spit from your head. You have to see it so many times that when you are prompted to write you already know pretty much what you're gonna say. Practice saying stuff slowly throughout your day that is valid and describing what you're doing within your day. Then make it deeper applying a metaphor that explains the same thing while at the same time adding the hip hop delivery of syllables in time with your beat. I encourage you to out do and re-invent yourself. I bet you'd be surprised. Get creative man not negative. Only a positive mind can ever come up with something extraordinary that people will recognize..



All the rest of yall... Tell you like dis...
Eat a phat _____ B_____ And I'm callin out Names! - Kurupt

[Prunedale]

Although... I do suggest you do copy artists you hear just to get the idea of how to put styles together or develop your own from. Everyone does that yes. I advise it to people I run into and alot of musicians I know say the same thing to me. I'm a student of music as well so whatever I'm messin with its the guys ahead of me that I look to for their experience to borrow and move forward myself from. I'm interested in hearing if any of you guys here have talent. Be fun to do some songs together for fun.

I'm my black. Chevro-let...

[MastaChronic]

Hmm did you have a hard upbringing?

I came up poor and my step dad was hard, but I never wanted to hurt anyone.. Why so aggressive? You don't play sports eh?

some people have had harder
i have no idea why and i dont play sports

[Prunedale]

You should get into football or hockey. Great way to channel your agression. Instead of killing a person, kill a puck. Then get good enough to control it. Brings you great joy and stress reliever. Plus you're creating those endorphines that promote happy-ism.

[Nochowderforyou]

Writing lyrics is by far one of the best ways to speak your mind and get stuff off your chest.

You need a wider vocab. MastaChronic. To hip-hop or rap, your voice is ygour weapon. Much like a guitar player uses their guitar to speak loud and clear, but in your case, it's your voice.

So I suggest you get a thesorous (sp?) and switch up some words that have an impact.

And if you're going to put down certain things, like religion in your case, then back your writing up on why you feel that way. Saying, "I hate religion, it's all BS" or something is not good enough. Explain why you hate it, examine the words and give them some flow, and what you say will stick with people more.

[JeenYuss]

the unshakeable belief that there is a magical man in the sky that protects them from evil is a highly schizophrenic and possibly dangerous delusion, it has caused wars. people that believe in this magical man are allowed to walk the streets free instead of being commited to the nearest psychiatric ward

fuck yeah christians have probably caused at least 50% of intetntional deaths since the beginning of the religion