as the others have said...it's just your typical stoned rap song.

If you really want some constructive criticism, try to be more creative with your approach. Try to use more metaphors and up your vocabulary a bit. Multi's would be a good incorporation as well. Also, the whole "I'm horny and want to decribe sexual encounters with a trailer trash whore" theme just doesn't appeal to me. Granted, there are some good sexual rap songs, but many of the appealing ones incorporate the use of creative components that capture people's attention. That's the goal you should go for.

Not trying to get ya down or anything, just trying to give you some good pointers to go on.