Yea, dont let the critics get to you. I will admit it though, it's no citizen kane. More along the lines of white chicks as far as quality. BUT, I think you've got a real cult classic on your hands. If you could find a way to put some mroe strange and original ideas into it shot it with a unique style, it could be a very entertaining movie. But keep writing. The more you do it the better you get at it. It's all about telling a good story. I'm writing a book right now and it's just gotten so bizarre. But I like bizzare books so I guess it's only fitting. You wright in a different style than me though. I only very loosly build a plot line and focus more on devloping interesting characters. I've got 2 pages worth of backstory on almost every character I make up. I think it's more fun to put two characters together and see what happens.