GOOD RAP! < seriously check this out

[smok3y]

Thats was pretty decent..:thumbsup:

[Cyclonite]

Im not a fan of ruining good songs in a completely different genre and squeaky voices.

[hahaitsdoogle]

if you want input that kid looks like a loser with an image problem to me. yeeeea yeeeeea yeeeaaahhhhh. what exactly seperates that from all other rap. oh hes sampling journey. this is not an attack on you and purely meant for constructive purposes.
jeeeeee thats what i ammm

o yeeeeeeeeaaaah

im tryn ta stack my nickels and dimes

seriously that is worse than typical rap to me and i am not a big fan of average rap

it is just a shame that he might make money off that crap when thousands of real musicians go unsigned. a crying shame

Your an idiot, he doesent slang dope or anything... hes talkin about makin money, moron.

[hahaitsdoogle]

Constructive Critiscism alright,

doggin someones hard work, not strate with me..

go the fuck away, let me see you put something together like this and then ill take your advice.

[Juggnoxalo]

Have some family in Detroit so I liked it as well, and I'm a huge hockey fan so and this verse caught my eye big time "I live in hockeytown" then had the hockeytown/redwins logo behind him, I'm guessing he was outside Joe Louis Arena. Glad to see he brung something I liked into his rap.

[Kid Dynamite]

i dont like rap much, but that shit got stuck in my head...

[blazed620]

kinda average......nothing really stood out in that song....the lyrics were simple....and by simple...listen to mike jones and thats an example of simple lyrics.. real rap needs metaphors and shit, listen to chamillionaire and you'll get an example of that

[robert42]

its good but he copies the flow from HOLD YOUR HANDS UP HIGH - Talib Kweli and Jean Grae

but its good still

[hahaitsdoogle]

If i had an Mp3 encoder id rip this song, from his first cd, and put it on here.

noone will be disapoointed.. all original.

thanks for the comments, if you dig it, pass that shit around with his myspace or something..

[Nochowderforyou]

That song reminded me of that BIG and 2 pac track, hell if I can remeber the name, but the high voice reminded me of that.

It was an okay track, nothing wow I found. It lacked originality. I've seen and heard it all before. He needs to write lyrics that MEAN something. Something that makes you look at things in a different view, something that makes you think.

If he were to come up with something original and fresh, I'd probably dig it, but I've heard it all before, you know.