That was a pretty good somg there Wesley. A suggestion though, the guitar playing was good, but maybe for the opening chords of the song, and the first few lines of the first verse, try picking each string seperatly, or, if you can, try using your finger tips to pick each string, like classical style. I think that will give it a nice buildup to the chorus and remaning song. It will start off super mellow and soft, then when the end of the first verse comes, start strumming them chords. You know what I mean?

From one musician to another. Just a suggestion. I just found the strumming of chords the same throughout the song. A little simple diversity can go a long ways.

Keep up the great work man! :thumbsup: