Mystery Cave

[Inferius]

that was totally lame. I kept skipping ahead trying to find out when anything good actually STARTS and he stops jumping at shadows, but it never happens.
He could of at least written an ending...

[SocksThaClown]

This is a prety good story. Right now I'm on page 6, but I keep thinking of the story and keep seeing the demon that flashes for split seconds on the exorcist. *shakes fist*

[friendowl]

great story
the ending coulda been better
but good writing
i liked it

[dryst]

im to lazy to read the rest what happened?

[souldistortion]

i read the whole thing and by the time i was done, i was left thinking. how could i have better spent that 3 hours of my life?

[dryst]

3 hours? lol i rea the first 2 pages and then i started skimming through the rest untill about page 7 i think when it messed up...

[herbollah]

yyyaaaaawwwwwwnnnnnnnn

[lagstronaut]

i guess i should've mentioned if you dont like reading then page 1 to 6 is pretty much skipable