Quote Originally Posted by dryst
not much in usuable terms because this is a cannabis site?
No... not much usable because you're writing about something fairly unique. fantasy fiction isn't exactly something you just sit down and write. If you don't have some sort of plot and characterization already lined up before you begin asking for suggestions.. then what do you have to build on? nothing!

I already gave my suggestion but it seemed to be a joke i guess...so..like i said.. i wouldn't expect much.

Doesn't hurt to ask though,
Bob.