its the prologe and part of a chp 1...it still has room for alot of changes...

this is what happened...i actually wrote that back when i was in high school i took a class called creative writing...i recently found the writing read over it and deciding to try and finish it up...but im gonna rewrite the entire thing first...so i have alot of room for new ideas...

i have an entire plot already thought out but its loose and still needs alot of development...
dryst Reviewed by dryst on . writing a book...need ideas.. i want to start writing a book...well actually i already started...i got like 15-20 pages of a draft started...so far its plot is set in a fantasy type world swords and magic type thing...i got a few characters... the main character are infact...twins... and their father...which they live with... any ideas on plot devlopment, characterization, or anything for that matter? Rating: 5