its the prologe and part of a chp 1...it still has room for alot of changes...

this is what happened...i actually wrote that back when i was in high school i took a class called creative writing...i recently found the writing read over it and deciding to try and finish it up...but im gonna rewrite the entire thing first...so i have alot of room for new ideas...

i have an entire plot already thought out but its loose and still needs alot of development...