empire-i'm going to take your suggestion, and possibly further develop this piece in my spare time. thanks for your suggestions btw, the title was taken directly from a song by the Smiths called Paint a Vulgar Picture--a song which I like alot. No harm in that though, since there are many people who look to music for writing inspiration. I may change the title, but right now this is a work in progress.

junkyard--it's not referring to all women. of course we can't make generalizations like this. that's like saying every muslim is a jihading terrorist, every christian is a bible-thumping intolerant ass, every kid who works at mcdonalds is a fat idiot with acne... but thanks for your compliments bro.

shoi- that's a nice picture.