Empire--

Thanks for your comments. They're much appreciated. I've been trying to develop my own style of writing, a style which i feel is blatantly honest. It's not supposed to bring you up. It's supposed to convey a message, so profoundly that you will understand it's meaning when you are finished reading it. Like you said, it's a bit depressing. This is the intended effect. I've modeled this off of the rhetorical style, if you know what I mean by that. It's supposed to paint a picture of what is happening--of what I am seeing in my mind--or more importantly, of what I am feeling.

The book Le Maitre de Chasse inspired me in developing this piece of writing. Mohammad Dib wrote this book in French, and he has a very good way at describing what is happening. It was a treat to read this novel in the original French. Even though I didn't understand everything, I still got the message.

Gray Matter, thanks as well for your compliments and speculation. Bad news: I really DO need to get laid Good news: It should happen in the near future! Horray for smoking cannabis with girls who haven't had sex in as long as I have!!!!! yay.
IanCurtisWishlist Reviewed by IanCurtisWishlist on . Paint a vulgar picture. Faceless and unknown, she creeps across the dark room. She lies down upon the bed made of roses and drinks the wine made of blood. Sympathy. It's this she has wanted, and she always gets what. You are powerless, your efforts are futile as you fall victim to her seductive charm (and powerful legs). You find yourself wanting to run, yet at the same time you are confused; the decision to take what she offers or to flee that which she offers, is a decision which will plague your conscious for Rating: 5