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07-30-2006, 05:29 PM #24
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Short story of me getting revenge
So it was an antique car radio at that?!?
And since when does standing up for yourself include stealing money and almost kicking some guy's ass? What happened to a nice, firm verbal warning that you can't just fuck with me? Hmmm.
Lol, dude, you left out like a whole middle section of your story, so it's hard to follow. It goes from the guy having second thoughts on giving you the cash to him running up to you scared for his life. But I think I got it, I think.
A half gram is not something to wet yourself over. If it were like an ounce, then yes, get mad. But in this case, get glad. My guess is that kid will probably try and get you back, even worse. So good luck being paranoid 24/7 thinkin' he's around the corner, waiting...
But hey, it's the principle, well yours at least, so glad you feel better.
Oh yes, and someone said above, but I'll agree: paragraphs are our friends.
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