thanks zara


youre write, its short for a whole chapter, but that isnt the whole chapter.. i just got bored one mornin and write that, so as for back story, i havent worked all that out yet, i was just messin around to see where itd take me.. thanks for the advice
GHoSToKeR Reviewed by GHoSToKeR on . woddooyathink? (Well i havent slept, and im bored, so i decided to take a break from my current project and start something new.. here it is, chapter 1.. if its crap or there are any mistakes then let me know, i need constructive criticism.. oh and dont blame me if it IS crap, coz i only did this in the space of half an hour or so lol) Chapter 1 - The Beginning With her ear against the door she could hear male voices; some angry, others tired and fatigued. Running away from Emma like that was Rating: 5