thanks penguin


i just noticed a few spelling and grammar mistakes.. also, where it says "loira" on one of the lines, it should say "Lana" i dont know what happened there LOL peace
GHoSToKeR Reviewed by GHoSToKeR on . woddooyathink? (Well i havent slept, and im bored, so i decided to take a break from my current project and start something new.. here it is, chapter 1.. if its crap or there are any mistakes then let me know, i need constructive criticism.. oh and dont blame me if it IS crap, coz i only did this in the space of half an hour or so lol) Chapter 1 - The Beginning With her ear against the door she could hear male voices; some angry, others tired and fatigued. Running away from Emma like that was Rating: 5