weed scene in a movie, need help WANT YOUR IDEAS!

[Pride]

independant movie for fun, just want ideas:
the script is..

First person view of Ed walking into the bathroom, sees Chester washing his hands and some random guy smoking weed, then goes in, sees himself taking a piss, pulls down his pants, takes a shit (hears noises of him relieving himself) then he sees the bathroom stall door shaking, and Henry on top of it, then Henry dives down and kicks his face, and then drowns Ed in the toilet (camera sees piss and shit inside the toilet) this is all still in first person view.
Chester tosses a body bag over the stall and Henry comes out with a body bag
Random pothead looks at Henry and looks at his own weed in amazement



I thought it was stupid and said that I'll change it, but then I realized- a cannabis forum is perfect for weed scene ideas.

It's ok to completely change the scene, just tell me what you think is a good weed scene. But my friend wants to keep the first person view.
This is all really about changing the pot head's role in the scene. I thought it was too unrealistic.. so tell me your ideas!

Pride Reviewed by Pride on 07-18-2006. weed scene in a movie, need help WANT YOUR IDEAS! independant movie for fun, just want ideas: the script is.. First person view of Ed walking into the bathroom, sees Chester washing his hands and some random guy smoking weed, then goes in, sees himself taking a piss, pulls down his pants, takes a shit (hears noises of him relieving himself) then he sees the bathroom stall door shaking, and Henry on top of it, then Henry dives down and kicks his face, and then drowns Ed in the toilet (camera sees piss and shit inside the toilet) this is all Rating: 5

[make it legal]

dude what the fuck kind of movie are you making????

sounds funny

[BloodAngel]

lmao that would ruin my day to get kicked in the face and drowned in a toilet. Ed's life sucks..

[smitty420]

hahah sounds insane post it on here when u make it it sounds liek a funny as video

[Pride]

No one has any idea how to change the pothead's role?

[smitty420]

no its perfect , the random pothead who isj ust there