overall pretty good needs work on cohirency
Genuine17 Reviewed by Genuine17 on . read my Short Story. Well this is for my English Writers Craft class. I gotta write a story with flashbacks and dialouge and the typical bullshit the teacher wants. Tell me what you think and if you feel there are any errors or something that needs to be added or removed please comment. Tell me how you think the story should end. Its about a guy forced to plead guilty when in reality he is innocent. It was Sept 17, 2004 in the urban area of Morocco. There was a man laying in his bed with shorts and a white Rating: 5