I hate to say it, musically it was solid, good job on production. However, you sounded like everyone else. I think you need to get a little more creative, some of the lyrics sounded reminiscent of cliche lyrics.

Obviously my taste on music are different than yours, and I'm probably not the best judge of rap. However if you want my 2cents, it would be cool if you shifted to more of a conceptual work. What do I mean about this in rap? Have you ever heard of Cage and Tame-1? They went together to form the Leak Bros for the album Waterworld, basically it's creating rap being being fucked up on PCP all the time. Get the album and listen to it to see what I mean. I think that might give you a source of inspiration to move away from sounding like everyone else.