yeah for real man, its pretty good. i agree with a lot of the previous posts: love the effects, but need better recording equipt.; voice is alright, needs polish, but it fits the song; and also you should think about eshelman's comment on the chorus. imo, not necessarily speed it up, but it needs a loud, strong, powerful chorus to give it an intense feeling, then come back down to your ending....a little work and it would be a great emotional jam. oh and like LIP said, its like something i would zone out to in the car. keep it up dude