Inspired

[kyle]

Wasup ladies and gentz, i wrote somethin ide like ta post,its about me havin to leave all my friends and my life, den i read kronic_bagz's still alive post and got some inspiration, kronics a mad rhymer wit soul, heres to you bro

Like a joke that is'nt funny
Like a day that is'nt sunny
Like a rich man with no money
I hate it all so much hunny
My life twisted, turned and altered
I'm hanging with the faultered
Wish i could go back
But its a nasty fact
That you cant go back
Nothing ever goes according to plan
I got my hand, balled in a fist
I'm gettin back up, im ready to fight
My hearts gettin dark and cold like a winter night
I want someone to be there
To hold my hand
To whsiper in my head "its ok man"
But i'm off again
No one gonna be der eva again
No one, with my hand
Here i am, ma bran new land

It aint great, i wrote at 1:07 am and im pretty fucked up, if you guys like it ill post some more well thought out work, lemme noe wat u think good or bad

kyle Reviewed by kyle on 09-12-2004. Inspired Wasup ladies and gentz, i wrote somethin ide like ta post,its about me havin to leave all my friends and my life, den i read kronic_bagz's still alive post and got some inspiration, kronics a mad rhymer wit soul, heres to you bro Like a joke that is'nt funny Like a day that is'nt sunny Like a rich man with no money I hate it all so much hunny My life twisted, turned and altered I'm hanging with the faultered Wish i could go back But its a nasty fact Rating: 5

[Kronik Bagz]

dat was good bro. anything u can feel in ur soul, if u can put it in a rhyme a lot of people can see what ur saying clearly.


but yea bro, that was good

[Ammie]

that was kick ass kyle keep it commin babe

[KillaBuzz]

yah rite on buddy.

[kyle]

haha trip, ill post some more on this thread a lil later, gotta do some of that sh*tty homework first, oh yeah dont i love it, map of canada, for like the tenth year inna row...

[Islander]

Wasup ladies and gentz, i wrote somethin ide like ta post,its about me havin to leave all my friends and my life, den i read kronic_bagz's still alive post and got some inspiration, kronics a mad rhymer wit soul, heres to you bro

Like a joke that is'nt funny
Like a day that is'nt sunny
Like a rich man with no money
I hate it all so much hunny
My life twisted, turned and altered
I'm hanging with the faultered
Wish i could go back
But its a nasty fact
That you cant go back
Nothing ever goes according to plan
I got my hand, balled in a fist
I'm gettin back up, im ready to fight
My hearts gettin dark and cold like a winter night
I want someone to be there
To hold my hand
To whsiper in my head "its ok man"
But i'm off again
No one gonna be der eva again
No one, with my hand
Here i am, ma bran new land

It aint great, i wrote at 1:07 am and im pretty fucked up, if you guys like it ill post some more well thought out work, lemme noe wat u think good or bad

Ya, wicked man. Look forward to hearing some more.

[Ammie]

Ya, wicked man. Look forward to hearing some more.

Amen to that Kyle!!! keep it commin

[smokeysbaby]

good job sweety

[dog420]

Wasup ladies and gentz, i wrote somethin ide like ta post,its about me havin to leave all my friends and my life, den i read kronic_bagz's still alive post and got some inspiration, kronics a mad rhymer wit soul, heres to you bro

Like a joke that is'nt funny
Like a day that is'nt sunny
Like a rich man with no money
I hate it all so much hunny
My life twisted, turned and altered
I'm hanging with the faultered
Wish i could go back
But its a nasty fact
That you cant go back
Nothing ever goes according to plan
I got my hand, balled in a fist
I'm gettin back up, im ready to fight
My hearts gettin dark and cold like a winter night
I want someone to be there
To hold my hand
To whsiper in my head "its ok man"
But i'm off again
No one gonna be der eva again
No one, with my hand
Here i am, ma bran new land

It aint great, i wrote at 1:07 am and im pretty fucked up, if you guys like it ill post some more well thought out work, lemme noe wat u think good or bad

Nice man ,,,,sweet as a nut

Peace

[raven]

everyone loves peotry thats awesome.