Quote Originally Posted by DrGonzo
if that was supposed to be funny, it worked...the ending was funny, for sure

but then again, I can be a morbid fuck sometimes...and I think people with problems are amusing.
Ya, it was defenetly meant as a dark comedy. I find it very funny when bad people fuck themselves over. I'm kinda morbid too I must admit. The only thing I've ever quenched watching a movie is when the Dog gets shot in the Toxic Avenger. Humans killing humans, and animals killing humans, and animals killing animals are all fine by me, but when you have a human kill an animal, that's where you cross the line in my books.

Toker, I think the part you missed is how at the beginning they're plotting as if they're wannabe serial killers, with just a couple murders under their belts so far. They like to think what they've done is major, but in real terms, it's just a couple murders. They then end up killing each other because they want to show their dedication to the cause and not end up rotting away in prison, as they believe the girl has gone to rat them out. Clear it up for you? I don't plan on writing any more new short ones. I just wrote this one in like 10 minutes or something because I wanted a break from my other one, but doubt I'll do that again. I do have a bunch of older ones though I could post.

I'd really like to hear some other people's stories, poems, songs, etc here as well. So if you have something you'd like to share, please do. I for one would happily read it, and I'm sure quite a few others would as well.
Islander Reviewed by Islander on . Just wrote this... Just wrote this, let me know what you think. It's a little bit long. FADE IN. INT. BRUCE/JIMā??S HOUSE - DAY BRUCE and JIM are sitting at a couch arguing, Bruce has trouble cracking a walnut with a nutcracker, so he grabs a hammer and smashes it open. BRUCE No way man, not someone that close to here. The last one was from only a couple blocks from here. JIM Bruce, come now, that means nothing. Tons of people live around here. They have nothing on us. BRUCE Rating: 5