Okay, so i'm gonna be brutally honest. I don't get it. I mean, two people meet, then they have dinner, she goes to the bathroom so instead of killing her they kill eachother? But why did they need to kill someone? Why did they then kill eachother? That's what I don't get, but then again, maybe it's just me. Maybe you could post some more? Seriously, i'd love to read it
GHoSToKeR Reviewed by GHoSToKeR on . Just wrote this... Just wrote this, let me know what you think. It's a little bit long. FADE IN. INT. BRUCE/JIMā??S HOUSE - DAY BRUCE and JIM are sitting at a couch arguing, Bruce has trouble cracking a walnut with a nutcracker, so he grabs a hammer and smashes it open. BRUCE No way man, not someone that close to here. The last one was from only a couple blocks from here. JIM Bruce, come now, that means nothing. Tons of people live around here. They have nothing on us. BRUCE Rating: 5