yah, so did you fail just because of those spelling errors, or was there more? My guess is there is more because you just dont fail an entire course because of some mispelled words. As far as the paper goes, it's an..um, interesting intro but you just paint a violent scenerio without any background info the reader might need to know. So really, just take out everything except the last sentence and start over. You can be creative with term papers, just not like that.
Its a Plant Reviewed by Its a Plant on . Why I failed 9th grade English 3 times. beginning of a paper worth 1/3 of entire grade - Imagine for a moment, that you are a deer deep within the forsest. You trot threw the dead leaves crunching under your feet like potato chips. A cool breeze blows bye, all you hear is the sounds of the forest, leaves rustling in the treese and birds chirping far off in the distance. You spot a small stream, that you have drunken from for many years. You move your head down to get a taste of the crystal clear running water as the Rating: 5