yah, so did you fail just because of those spelling errors, or was there more? My guess is there is more because you just dont fail an entire course because of some mispelled words. As far as the paper goes, it's an..um, interesting intro but you just paint a violent scenerio without any background info the reader might need to know. So really, just take out everything except the last sentence and start over. You can be creative with term papers, just not like that.