Late Night Poetry!

[Mary Jane x3]

Do you have the time
Could you spare a second.

If not then what good are you
Just a nother usless waist of space,
You dont have a place.

If you have that second and I hope you do...
Could you show me the way out?

I want to leave this strange place
Never been here before
Gosh what a bore it is.

This place you call a mall
It looks like more of a hall
Its just that its so small.

Sorry for waisting your time
But thanks for not waisting mine.

Good work but try not to rhyme so much, make a better flow the rhyming kinda makes it more 6th gradish

keep writing tho

Mary Jane x3 Reviewed by Mary Jane x3 on 03-23-2006. Late Night Poetry! Do you have the time Could you spare a second. If not then what good are you Just a nother usless waist of space, You dont have a place. If you have that second and I hope you do... Could you show me the way out? Rating: 5