Late Night Poetry!

[tblueyes]

Do you have the time
Could you spare a second.

If not then what good are you
Just a nother usless waist of space,
You dont have a place.

If you have that second and I hope you do...
Could you show me the way out?

I want to leave this strange place
Never been here before
Gosh what a bore it is.

This place you call a mall
It looks like more of a hall
Its just that its so small.

Sorry for waisting your time
But thanks for not waisting mine.

tblueyes Reviewed by tblueyes on 03-22-2006. Late Night Poetry! Do you have the time Could you spare a second. If not then what good are you Just a nother usless waist of space, You dont have a place. If you have that second and I hope you do... Could you show me the way out? Rating: 5

[JunkYard]

How many know a shadow?
Sheâ??s playful as I recall.
How many see her magic,
upon an animated wall?

A candle burning brightly,
extends its ghostly eye.
Sheâ??ll dance upon the ceiling,
above the room so high.

But in the morning sunrise,
the shadowâ??s at her best.
Sheâ??ll follow you forever,
and never need to rest.

But in the dark of night,
she puts her needs to bed.
Sheâ??ll belong again tomorrow,
or whenever light is shed.

[tblueyes]

Nice poem, do you have any others? I made mine up on the fly. How about you?

[Mary Jane x3]

Do you have the time
Could you spare a second.

If not then what good are you
Just a nother usless waist of space,
You dont have a place.

If you have that second and I hope you do...
Could you show me the way out?

I want to leave this strange place
Never been here before
Gosh what a bore it is.

This place you call a mall
It looks like more of a hall
Its just that its so small.

Sorry for waisting your time
But thanks for not waisting mine.

Good work but try not to rhyme so much, make a better flow the rhyming kinda makes it more 6th gradish

keep writing tho

[JunkYard]

Nice poem, do you have any others? I made mine up on the fly. How about you?

Just one I had tucked away.

Will you post some more of yours? I'll post another of mine to get started. This one is one of my favorites; I wrote it a little over a year ago. Hope you like...

It's called:

â??Sacredâ??

Fragile veins, needle gashed arms,
horrendous badges upon array.
Every wound a moment in time
in which sheâ??s able to fade away.

Her addiction burns deep inside,
like inflictions of swallowed glass.
Thus, poison sheâ??ll thrust into her veins,
so she can die again at last.

This evil alliance eases the hurt.
Her needs she cannot resist.
It is only when the pain subsides,
that it seems life no longer exists.

Alone she sits in a candle lit room,
the shadows animate the walls.
She hovers a spoon over the flame,
then a sizzle, and again death calls.

Preparing her fix she pulls the plunge,
then a push to bleed out the air.
The needle ready to make its mark,
and assist in containing despair.

A strap is wrapped around her arm,
and then a tap to find a vein.
Soon sheâ??ll find what sheâ??s looking for.
Yes, soon she will feel no pain.

Virtual death is found in this needle,
the needle sets in descending pace.
Knowing she needs it, she injects,
and now the sinner finds her grace.

In parallel she begins to sink.
Her head clears, and images blur.
This savior now extends his arms,
and once again, life sleeps for her.

Lets keep this thread going, tblueyes, and maybe post one each night. What do ya say? I love poetry...

[tblueyes]

Sounds good I'll post some up when I think of some more and I'm usualy on in the morning so I'll get them up then. My computer crashed so I don't have any of my old poetry :'( . I'll try to get something up soon and yeah lets keep it going and hopefuly other people will join.

[tblueyes]

The pain in my heart it tuches me so and in a way that you will never know.

You've hurt me once and yet again but now never, never again.

Free at last from your grip now I am strong and not a wimp.

Life moves on not harming me now and I am happy to be part of the crowed.



Its kinda short but I think that one sounds better then my last. What do you think?

[JunkYard]

Both are good, so I can't decide which I like better? btw, was this one off the fly?

I can't write unless I have a good 30 minutes on my hands, lol! Let me dig up another, and I'll post later...

:thumbsup:

It would great if others joined in, too,

[psychocat]

They're sweet and all but man they are kinda depressing me so I thought I would offer up something a little more lighthearted.

There once was a girl from Ealing
Who had a peculiar feeling
She laid on her back
And opened her crack
And pissed allover the ceiling.

:stoned: :thumbsup: :dance:

[HiddenBeauty]

How many know a shadow?
Sheâ??s playful as I recall.
How many see her magic,
upon an animated wall?

A candle burning brightly,
extends its ghostly eye.
Sheâ??ll dance upon the ceiling,
above the room so high.

But in the morning sunrise,
the shadowâ??s at her best.
Sheâ??ll follow you forever,
and never need to rest.

But in the dark of night,
she puts her needs to bed.
Sheâ??ll belong again tomorrow,
or whenever light is shed.

I don't write poetry myself but I love reading others poetry,especially this one.I look forward to reading more of your poetry :smokin: