I'm not sure if this is the right place, but I have started a new screenplay over teenage pregnancy called "Her body her choice" and would like some opinions.Goes like this:

Monologue/intro:

Still in high school, only a teenager.Assured by herself her luck could not be deteriorated.Who would have guessed? Surely not her friends and family.Is a future even possible for her as of now? Fear and confusion cloud her mind, it almost seems essential to her he must know.

Dialogue(between the couple G=girl,B=boy):

G: You need to know something.
B: Whats wrong?
G: Everything...You, your manipulation, its all catching up!
B: (stuttering) B-Baby I don't understand?
G: I know...I know, because it would have been way to fucking convenient if you did, HUH?!?
B: What the fuck is your PROBLEM?!?! Will you tell me whats WRONG?!?
G: (crying) You'll curse at it won't you? You'll yell at it, and call it bad names, and--(interupted)
B: What is-, What is this it baby? What are you trying to tell me?
VoidLivesOn Reviewed by VoidLivesOn on . Screenplay I'm not sure if this is the right place, but I have started a new screenplay over teenage pregnancy called "Her body her choice" and would like some opinions.Goes like this: Monologue/intro: Still in high school, only a teenager.Assured by herself her luck could not be deteriorated.Who would have guessed? Surely not her friends and family.Is a future even possible for her as of now? Fear and confusion cloud her mind, it almost seems essential to her he must know. Dialogue(between the Rating: 5