Quote Originally Posted by lemonboy
Just a quick edit of your most recent paragraph. I'm not sure if this is what you were looking for but I hope it helps.

Ohhh, High school. A place where teenagers get together to learn in harmony regardless of their race, gender, or looks. High school is the very place we get together to drink the nectar of education. Heh... You would have to be blind, deaf, and dumb to believe that. I think what I really meant was: High school is a place where social status reigns supreme and if you're not up to date with there shitty unapt noise they actually call music, well then you're not worth their time. You know what they say, "High school is supposed to be the best years of your lives!" In real life arrogance often breeds hate, so consider this: arrogance is practically the cornerstone of high school. Who's complaining? No one. Sort of.

AWESOME MAN! just the little critiquing that I need.Also I made a thread asking you if you had any messanger programs..did you come across it?

Also you wouldn't be offended if I just used some things you suggested and kept some of the things I originally wrote? Because I don't want you to think your help isn't useful, some of the little things your wrote really help out.