Quote Originally Posted by Awill3449
Haha thats good. And about square one, didn't mean starting over per se, just rethinking the points you were making and editing it so that its still funny and makes more interesting observations.
Yeah I need to work on the high school relationship points because that would to be very essential to my rant.Prepubescent teenage boys pronouncing there new found love to there 2 week old girlfriends to spite his friends.It can also be vice versa, ya know...thats high school for you.In fact I might add that line in there.
VoidLivesOn Reviewed by VoidLivesOn on . Help? If you don't remember I made a thread asking for help on writting a satiristic witty rant over high school for my short film I will be presenting to my high school video tech class.Heres what I have so far: High school, a place where a variety of teenagers can get togeather and learn in harmony regardless of there race,gender, or dress preference.The very place students can get togeather and expand there horizons with the nectar of education.Heh...you'd have to be a moron to beleive this.I Rating: 5